Help?!

Most of you know that I have been working on a headstone to donate to the Creighton University's infant burial plot. (This is where my son is buried) Okay, so if you haven't heard me talk about this before let me explain how the plot is. It's a place where several babies are buried together. The 'Creighton" babies are all in this one plot in a location of the cemetery dubbed Babyland 2. Babyland has several sections in the cemetery 1,2, and 3. In each of these sections are also individual plots. Some are privately owned or there a few plots owned by area hospitals. My son was born at Creighton University Hospital. I liked the idea that he wouldn't be alone, that he would be surrounded by other babies. (At the time I felt very good about this decision, but looking back, I wish I had gone a different route. I wish he was buried closer to our home with family, but that's a whole different post)

But this particular plot doesn't have a headstone or any kind of a marker. Now I've been visiting this site for over a year all at varying times of the day and I have never seen another family at this plot. I know that I cannot be the only parent out of 40 or more who likes to visit their baby. I assume that these parents aren't here visiting because they don't know where to go. Remember this post, it took us over an hour the 1st time we visited to find it even with the help of cemetery staff. Because of this I have been working towards getting a headstone placed on the site so that no parents ever go through the frustration like our first visit there. It was awful!

Now I cant seem to get the wording right. I feel like it's either not special enough or that it's not broad enough for all the families. I almost feel like they're to specific towards Bryston and leaving out the other precious babies. So please help me decide. Which do you like/dislike? I want this to be perfect but I have to remember that it's not just for me!


Creighton University Medical Center
Forever In Our Hearts
Donated in memory of Bryston Ray Davison

Creighton University Medical Center
So Small, So Sweet, So Soon
Donated in memory of Bryston Ray Davison

Creighton University Medical Center
An angel in the book of life wrote down my baby's birth,
And whispered as she closed it...
"Too beautiful for earth"

Creighton University Medical Center
Gone But Not Forgotten
Donated in memory of Bryston Ray Davison

Creighton University Medical Center
Sleep my beautiful angel on your pillow in the sky,
angels are forever so we'll never say goodbye

Creighton University Medical Center
Honoring the brief lives of your precious children.
Donated in memory of Bryston Ray Davison

Creighton University Medical Center
Thy memory shall ever be a guiding star to Heaven
Donated in memory of Bryston Ray Davison